Okay, so... This is my entry for 's "Paint my OC" contest. [link] (It, of course, doesn't stand a chance against some awesomely professional entries submitted for the contest but I have more personal reasons for wishing to participate in this contest than winning).
I have so much more to say about it so do excuse me as I proceed to ramble now. xD
First of all. OMG, this took me so many hours! *dies* No, seriously, I think this beat the previous record time of mine of working on a single drawing (back then those were roughly 40 hours, I believe). Yes, I am am THAT slow, indeed. Not even joking. And it is done. I feel empty. And so very pleased since I pretty much pushed myself to new limits with this work. ^^
Now. Previously I mentioned that I had a personal reason for taking part in the contest. Let me tell you why. It was about... 4 years ago when I colored my first lineart (first attempts in GIMP, oooooh, the nostalgic memories~). It was a simple lineart I found on dA. When I was done, I was quite proud with the outcome, printed it out and brought to school to show to others too. Someone asked me if I drew the lines also and back then I lied that I did. Oddly enough, it gave me a slight push art-wise. I realized that I wanted to be able to create a lineart like that one day as well. At this very moment I am not too far from that anymore and it makes me extremely happy. And I decided to redo this and push my limits once more to see what I could achieve if I tried enough. This time without lying, however. And finally the lineart is turned into a vision that I had in my mind. And I can't help but wonder if after another 4 years I'll be able to create a lineart and fully finish a drawing in this level without forcing myself as much. ...We'll see in 4 years, I guess? XD
Also, why did I pick this lineart? I couldn't resist. This girl was so angelic and beautiful that I just wanted to try and attempt to breathe a life into her. I hope it worked out well. ^^
Okay. I am done rambling. If you actually read this - you are my hero in patience, indeed. xD
First of all, I want to congratulate you on the professional growth. From your description it seems you've worked really hard and I think it shows in your work. The coloring is great, I love how you created textures and how they go with the rest of the picture. Also I really admire how you balanced the cold and warm colors and light and shadows. The lightsource is really easy to detect on your picture which is great, many people struggle with keeping their lights and shadows "real". Also the detailing is perfect, all those petals - they are light and alive! The only thing i wish to see here is a consistent color theme. Your colors really work together but i can't say there's a one theme. Thank you for reading my critique and with you best of luck and improvement!
Awww, thank you! It's all about challenging yourself to see your limits and ending up happily surprised. : ) You should try that out too. It's a great boost for a confidence and I think it's what every artist needs. ^^
This quite beautiful, I love your details and the colors you choose to use for this piece. Your lineart is clean and well done. I also love your whole concept and being able to see your imagination at work! Awesome work!
The coloring is great, I love how you created textures and how they go with the rest of the picture. Also I really admire how you balanced the cold and warm colors and light and shadows. The lightsource is really easy to detect on your picture which is great, many people struggle with keeping their lights and shadows "real". Also the detailing is perfect, all those petals - they are light and alive!
The only thing i wish to see here is a consistent color theme. Your colors really work together but i can't say there's a one theme.
Thank you for reading my critique and with you best of luck and improvement!
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